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The Punisher by ~sunchica:iconsunchica:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Spiritual > Open




I am the punisher
the sword
at the gates
of heaven
fits only
in my hands
fallen heads
still smiling
unaware
that beauty lies
lies to them
as they lied to her
an eye for an eye
a head for a heart
straight
low life
high hopes
drops
on the ground
safe and sound
a thud
far down
in the mud
©2004-2010 ~sunchica
:iconsunchica:

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the witch - the gate -

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:icondandellion:
~dandellion Sep 25, 2004, 2:51:29 PM
image: wow again:!: it is great how preciselly it fits the poem. nice measure of color on the witch, and good trick with texture over the face to emphasize face expression. saturated colors of the b/g are nice opposit to this :P

poem: very easy to read, very good in making its point. I like its short verse, it make it very rhytmic.
:icondandellion:
~dandellion Sep 25, 2004, 2:53:50 PM
oh.. and yes... that strong red against green outside.... it made efect of separate planes, the inside and the outside, before and after the gate.... good job
:iconsunchica:
~sunchica Sep 25, 2004, 9:01:23 PM
wow great comment :D :hug:

guess my two day stock search and torture with details and colours worked afterall :dance:

only one thing... she is not A witch... she is Lilith :fuzzydemon:
:icondandellion:
~dandellion Sep 25, 2004, 10:31:14 PM
you said she's a witch in stock credits......
she being a Lilith makes a bit more sense........
:iconjohnybegood:
~johnybegood Sep 26, 2004, 2:36:33 AM
... PIECE OF ART :worship: ... ta veza izmedju slike i pjesme je nevjerovatna, prozimaju se medjusobno i dopunjuju ... odlican izbor stokova i izvanredna manipulacija .... :+fav: ...

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:iconsunchica:
~sunchica Sep 26, 2004, 11:07:32 AM
well she is

look @ her stock and photo names :D

but not in my work ;)
:iconsunchica:
~sunchica Sep 26, 2004, 11:12:06 AM
:aww: nishta lepshe od nagradjenog truda :hug:
hvala za :+fav: :)
:icondjegho:
!djegho Sep 26, 2004, 5:25:11 PM
cool! who's in the pic?? :fuzzydemon:
:iconsunchica:
~sunchica Sep 26, 2004, 5:49:23 PM
honey.... next time you make a comment try to read the description first ok ?
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